*Significant idea: Humans are easily deceived by
rumors and flat-out lies
*claim: I agree
for the fact that most people stick to rumors rather than looking up the fact
for their self, for instance myself.
*3 Reasons:
(1) When reading the newspaper, images and quotes may be misleading.
(2) in most cases people might feel there ego are to strong
and them ,themselves can’t be wrong.
(3)Another reason might be is if someone is being
contradicted of their beliefs, most would strongly stick to their basic
disregarding contradiction.
*thesis:
I know
Jeffery Kluger is right when states that humans are Humans are easily deceived
by rumors and flat-out lies, because I, myself stick to rumors rather than
looking up the fact. For example when
reading the newspaper, images and quotes may be misleading, also in most cases
people might feel there ego are to strong and them ,themselves can’t be wrong. Another
reason might be is if someone is being contradicted of their beliefs, most
would strongly stick to their basic disregarding contradiction.
Mmm--not quite there yet, for a variety of reasons:
ReplyDelete1. the first "reason" is really and example (that's why you started one sentence with "for example").
2. reasons 2&3 are from Kluger. You need your own reasons.
To get a better idea of how to do this, check the two examples on my blog.